As I Approched

Author’s note: Our writing circle group decide to think of a sentence and then finish it with what ever you want. The sentences was “ As I approached.” When you read this think of you being on a fast roller coaster and then all the sudden it stops. Enjoy.

As I approached getting on the roller coaster I had the sudden urge to just start screaming and that's what I did then all the people yelled at me saying the ride didn’t even start. As I sat down I put the bar really tight because I didn’t want to fall out. Then the ride began whoosh as we zoomed up the highest point. I screamed so loud that when we went down the other side I had no voice. Zooming really fast we go around a loop and then at the top of the loop the roller coaster stopped. AH we're going to die I scream. The roller coaster started up again. Once it was over I screamed “ THAT WAS THE BEST RIDE EVER.” As we were heading out of the park we got tickets to come again next month. I was so excited. I thought to myself that was the best roller coaster ever.

Month later.....

Hooray the roller coaster is still here when I was walking in the entrance of the park I saw the newest most popular roller coaster ever made. I have to go on that I yelled. Heading towards the roller coaster there was a long line. While we were waiting I started eating a corn dog. That was yummy. I can see the beginning of the line we're almost there. I can’t wait this is going to be really fun. Were up next my heart is pounding I heard the group in front of us screaming their heads off. I thought to myself is this really something to I want to do but I can’t back out it’s too late. Were up as I got in the cart I was speechless. BOOM BOOM the roller coaster has started enjoy your ride side the man operating the roller coaster. Approaching the top of the roller coaster I could see our car. As I turned to Hannah we were already starting to head down the other end. AH.. I scream this is actually really fun. HAHA!! I started laughing because the person in front of us lost his hat and it flew into the other person's face. The ride slowly came to a end. Awh. I didn’t want it other I yelled. While we were walking to our car.