Monday, October 8, 2012

Bird sings


The conflict is that the bird is trapped in a cage and his wings are clipped and his feet are tied and all thinks about is flying in the sun rays of the sun and the blue sky's. The bird is trapped in the cage and all he can do is sing. All day he sing a song about soaring through the sky and feeling the wind breeze.

There really wasn't a resolution in the poem I had because the bird was still stuck in the cage with his wings clipped and his feet tied.I think that the resolution in this Poem should be that one day the wind was strong and the cage broke and the bird set free while singing in the freedom.

1 comment:

  1. There were a few grammar mistakes but besides that, Good Description Pal!

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